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Find Your Inner Death - 1 by =renainnocenti:iconrenainnocenti:



It all happened three months ago...
"Get back here you little twerp!"
A pickpocket stole one of my most treasured items,
a set of wings that my mother had made for me...

When i cought her,
she was trying to scam a lady shopkeeper into buying them...


"What the **** are you doing! Those are mine! You have no right to sell those!!" I grabbed the kid by the collar.
The lady looked at me and smiled. "I know."
I raised an eyebrow. "What?"
"Are you Rena?"
"Uh, yeah...?" was the only thing that I could think of.
"Then," she held out her hand to me. "These belong to you."
I took what she held out to me. "I've never seen these before..."
They were the most beautiful earrings that I've ever seen.
"Are you sure???" She looked at me.
"Yeah, i have seriousley never seen these before..."
They were little celtic crosses, made of silver....
"But I was told that they were yours..." She looked down. "That reminds me, this is also yours..." She handed me a strange silver charm.
"What the heck is that???"
"It's an important artifact that was destined to belong to you."
"'Destined'?" I looked closer are the intertwined half-circles. "I don't believe in destiny."
"You can have these back," she handed me my wings.
"Th-thank you."
When she turned away, I noticed that she too, had a pair of earrings exactly like mine, as well as a charm in her hair that matched the one she gave me.
'Who are you?'
"My name is Rastel Caris,"
"I didn't say anyth-"
"You are now one of us, Rena."
"What the hell?"
"Like I said," She started polishing one of the many antique vases that she had in her shop, "You are now one of us."
How was I supposed to know, how right she really was?
©2007-2009 =renainnocenti
:iconrenainnocenti:

Author's Comments

i dont know where the classification for this would be...
>.>
that makes me a retard
anyways
from now on, im going to refer to the story as fyid
just in case you want to keep reading

and if anyone wants to illustrate this story i'd be sooooooooo honoured!

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part 1 [link]
part 2 [link]
part 3 [link]
part 4 [link]
part 5 [link]
part 6 [link]
part 7 [link]
part 8 [link]
part 9 [link]
part 10 [link]
part 11 [link]
part 12 [link]
part 13 [link]
Part 14 [link]
Part 15 [link]
part 16 [link]
part 17 [link]

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:iconrenainnocenti:
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i really like this story, and i hope you do too, because it will dewvelop into somthing unimaginable

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Riza: Why are you sparkling, sir?
Roy: FIRE.
Riza: Excuse me?
Roy: I'm setting things on fire, Lieutenant.
Riza: I see. And the sparkles are necessary?
Roy: Don't you see their allure?
Riza: No.
Roy: *emo*

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<3*DoodleMoogle<3
:iconlivingcomforteagle:
this shows good promise. :) there are a few spelling/grammar mistakes, if you'd like me to point them out for correcting?

--
dark pictures, thrones, the stones that pilgrims kiss,
poems that take a thousand years to die;
but ape the immortality of this
red label on a little butterfly.
-vladimir nabokov
:iconrenainnocenti:
nah, thats okay

but if you know a good comic artist that needs something to waste time on...

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Riza: Why are you sparkling, sir?
Roy: FIRE.
Riza: Excuse me?
Roy: I'm setting things on fire, Lieutenant.
Riza: I see. And the sparkles are necessary?
Roy: Don't you see their allure?
Riza: No.
Roy: *emo*

Icon-~mr-skateboarder
<3*DoodleMoogle<3
:iconlivingcomforteagle:
I will keep you in mind :)

--
dark pictures, thrones, the stones that pilgrims kiss,
poems that take a thousand years to die;
but ape the immortality of this
red label on a little butterfly.
-vladimir nabokov
:iconrenainnocenti:
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thanky

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Riza: Why are you sparkling, sir?
Roy: FIRE.
Riza: Excuse me?
Roy: I'm setting things on fire, Lieutenant.
Riza: I see. And the sparkles are necessary?
Roy: Don't you see their allure?
Riza: No.
Roy: *emo*

Icon-~mr-skateboarder
<3*DoodleMoogle<3
:iconmaster-deus:
underpants...

you need to make the setting a little more...there.

needs mo' setting woman!

but, whatev...i do that too D:

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:star:~Chibi-Kai-Chan:bulletblack:join the jam

icon was made my =renainnocenti, to be paired with her icon
:icondarkmouseyalchemist:
if i get around to reading all of it D: i would be happy to try and illustrate it, but i have a low attention span, do u have a summary?

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anthro artists ban me
:iconrenainnocenti:
8U


erm...
i actually have the entire thing in one deviation... (theres even a journal entry and a club devoted to it! ^^;)
xD

the story is actually kinda weird

Rena Thyme, (the heroine) reminices of the day her life changed forever, this day happened three months ago >.>
it started out as a family vacation to a famous city named caris, but then, a pickpocekt by the name of risa, steals a precious set of wings form rena. Risa leads her to a run down antique shop in a marketplace, where risa tries to pawn off renas beloved wings.
the shopkeeper, rastel caris, smiles and presents rena with a crest and a pair of earrings, these items bind her to a strange fate.
[link].
kastyr and faite are both after her heart (why does this always seem to happen?) >.>
theres a demon with his girlfriend (they may even be the bad guys!) >.>
a cross-dressing nurse who holds a dark secret (and is gay) >.>
twins, a girl and a boy, the girl is followed by a supposed fiance, the boy is deathly afraid of lightning >.>
yadda yadda yadda

(i get bored easily, this story was the product of boredom... ^^;)

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Riza: Why are you sparkling, sir?
Roy: FIRE.
Riza: Excuse me?
Roy: I'm setting things on fire, Lieutenant.
Riza: I see. And the sparkles are necessary?
Roy: Don't you see their allure?
Riza: No.
Roy: *emo*

Icon-~mr-skateboarder
<3*DoodleMoogle<3
:icondarkmouseyalchemist:
i liek weird things :D!!! ill read through it and start working on it, this sounds interesting....especailly this cross-dressing nurse who is also gay XD =yaoi fangirl squeel

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anthro artists ban me

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